Journal 21

My role in this project was to write about the qualifications for being an academic achievement coordinator. It was a little bit of an interesting thing to look for because I personally didn’t know what an academic achievement coordinator was before starting this project. So filling out the qualifications required researching the job. I am confident in our group’s ability to divide up the work and then each do our part to pull the project together. The way we have worked in the past has been smooth so I’m assuming it will continue like that. Some questions I have for peer review are:

How can I make it sound more formal/does it need to sound more formal?

Is what I wrote clear and not too wordy/does it need more words?

Does everything flow and make sense? 

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