Journal 15

Journal #15: Some comments I feel like I make a lot are about repetitiveness over certain words. I think this is a helpful comment to make because some people don’t realize they are repeating words until someone else points it out or they read it out loud. I know that is something I do at least. Another comment that gets made pretty frequently is adding a little more context to certain parts of peoples pieces. These kinds of comments are good to hear because they are a reminder for people like me who haven’t shared their pieces yet. That’s what I like about being a part of these feedback sessions because they help me a lot when trying to figure out what I need to add to my story.  People in our class make great points that I would never even think of so it’s nice to hear all these different perspectives. I also think it’s interesting to hear the variety in all these peoples topics and find out more about professors or coaches that I know nothing about.