Monthly archives: April, 2022
Entangled life
Consumerism
Blog proj 19 and 20
Nypd-incompetent-subway-shooting-cut-funding This first article is about throwing funding at the police and it was written by the WSN editorial board on April 18th. Right away this article is a little unique to the other articles I have chosen because it is an editorial piece. The other day there was a shooting on a Brooklyn subway, …
Journal #8
Journal 8: Today I received feedback for my feature and I’m very appreciative of all that I received. I was very concerned about my piece being too casual, and I had even emailed it to Jesse the day before he sent it out to the class so that he could check it a little. After …
Journal 13
Journal #13: As of right now I feel like I am in a good place for my story. The person that I chose to interview for my profile piece is Jeanette. I do not know her last name yet but she is a lunch lady in the UNE cafeteria. She is well liked around campus …
Journal 17
Journal 17: I had my piece workshopped today along with workshopping two others. I thought the conversations we had today were very helpful for everyone, and I found advice in words that were not even said about my piece. It seemed like something that was a common theme for all three of us was little …
Journal #14
Journal 14: My piece was workshopped today and I think that the feedback I received will help me greatly. A lot of people commented on the better parts of my writing too and I was thankful to receive those compliments as well as the feedback. One thing that will help me a lot is the …
Blog project 17 & 18
Nyu-abu-dhabi-sun-waves-discovery This first article is about a researcher at NYU that discovered something that challenges the current laws of physics. It was written by Nicole Lu on April 8th. The researchers at Abu Dhabi center for space science discovered a set of high frequency waves that defy the previously understood laws of physics. The three …
Journal 15
Journal #15: Some comments I feel like I make a lot are about repetitiveness over certain words. I think this is a helpful comment to make because some people don’t realize they are repeating words until someone else points it out or they read it out loud. I know that is something I do at …
